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Last year 2014, my family and I went to Lampung for a holiday and celebrated the new year, we leave early from Jakarta because to avoid traffic jam, the journey takes 6 hours from Jakarta to the port of bakauheni by boat plus 4 hours from bakauheni harbor to Bandar Lampung. When we arrived at bakauheni harbor , we were looking for lunch, after lunch we went to Lampung city.
During the trip to lampung city we crossed Jl. Lintas Sumatra, we see many forests and landscapes that are still free from pollution, the streets are winding and hilly.
When we arrived in the capital city of Lampung in the afternoon before the isya, we went looking for a villa that we ordered on the internet, after arriving at the villa we met with my relatives family because we wanted to vacation together and we had promised before we meet there.
After we meet we go looking for seafood for dinner, seafood from Lampung is very fresh, after eating we go to the fish market to buy fish that will be cooked in the villa.
The next day we went to klara beach, mutun beach and sari ringgung beach by car, very far from Bandar Lampung to go to place it all , when we got there, we walked along the beach, playing water and sand. Then we also swim on the beach, we ride a banana boat. Besides doing many activities we also watched some foreign tourist’s activities. They were lying on the beach, while others were having massage or surfing. midnight at 1 am we returned to the villa
The plan today we want to go to malls and shops to buy party materials for new year celebrate like barbeque tools, seafood, beef, chicken, roasted corn, and etc. we celebrate this new year just in the villa and watch the fireworks.
January 1, 2015, we are getting ready to check out from villa after check out we go to muncak tirtayasa, the plan today we go to walur beach but my sister is tired so we just to muncak tirtayasa only.
after spending a day at muncak tirtayasa, we with my family relatives go to port bakauheni to go back to Jakarta.
Last year 2014, my family and I went to Lampung for a holiday and celebrated the new year, we leave early from Jakarta because to avoid traffic jam, the journey takes 6 hours from Jakarta to the port of bakauheni by boat plus 4 hours from bakauheni harbor to Bandar Lampung. When we arrived at bakauheni harbor , we were looking for lunch, after lunch we went to Lampung city.
During the trip to lampung city we crossed Jl. Lintas Sumatra, we see many forests and landscapes that are still free from pollution, the streets are winding and hilly.
When we arrived in the capital city of Lampung in the afternoon before the isya, we went looking for a villa that we ordered on the internet, after arriving at the villa we met with my relatives family because we wanted to vacation together and we had promised before we meet there.
After we meet we go looking for seafood for dinner, seafood from Lampung is very fresh, after eating we go to the fish market to buy fish that will be cooked in the villa.
The next day we went to klara beach, mutun beach and sari ringgung beach by car, very far from Bandar Lampung to go to place it all , when we got there, we walked along the beach, playing water and sand. Then we also swim on the beach, we ride a banana boat. Besides doing many activities we also watched some foreign tourist’s activities. They were lying on the beach, while others were having massage or surfing. midnight at 1 am we returned to the villa
The plan today we want to go to malls and shops to buy party materials for new year celebrate like barbeque tools, seafood, beef, chicken, roasted corn, and etc. we celebrate this new year just in the villa and watch the fireworks.
January 1, 2015, we are getting ready to check out from villa after check out we go to muncak tirtayasa, the plan today we go to walur beach but my sister is tired so we just to muncak tirtayasa only.
after spending a day at muncak tirtayasa, we with my family relatives go to port bakauheni to go back to Jakarta.
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Last year 2014, my family and I went to Lampung for holiday and celebrate the new year, we leave early from Jakarta because We need to avoid the traffic jam, the journey takes 6 hours from Jakarta to the port of Bakauheni by boat plus 4 hours from Bakauheni harbour to Bandar Lampung. When we arrived at Bakauheni harbour, we were looking for lunch, after lunch we went to Lampung city.
- Ordered bisa diganti juga jadi booked
- Meet jadi met
- Go jadi went (karena ini cerita masa lalu)
- Eating jadi eat
- It’s very far from Bandar Lampung
- Besides doing many activities bisa diganti jadi other than doing many activities
- The plan for today
- Want jadi wanted
- So we only went to muncak tirtayasa